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Arrival In Forks & First Day

Posted on 04/10/2010 by vivisector

Arrival In Forks So I have just got to write my parents out of this story. My mom is totally weak and can’t fend for herself. I worried about it for the first five minutes on the plane ride from … Continue reading →

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Breaking Dawn Chapter Two

Posted on 01/25/2010 by vivisector

Someone must have forced Otis through a creative writing class in between this book and the last. She’s learned to skip! We go from her trying on her dress in the last chapter to lying in bed with Ed the … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Twenty Three

Posted on 01/09/2010 by vivisector

So I’ve been peeking ahead in Breaking Dawn. I wanted to get an idea of what I’m up against before tackling it. I made it to the dedication and had to stop right there. Otis thanks Muse for ‘a series … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Twenty One

Posted on 01/05/2010 by vivisector

What better way to make your audience regret they ever progressed beyond Dick and Jane than having your character recap what they just read in the previous chapter? The first couple of paragraphs are just that. This is a recap … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Eighteen

Posted on 12/30/2009 by vivisector

Whew, I feel grounded again. The opening dialogue helps me out for this one. “That had to be the longest party in the history of the world,” I complained on the way home. No Bella, it only felt like that. … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Seventeen

Posted on 12/27/2009 by vivisector

Bella hears Edward’s soft voice from behind. Yes! Finally some boffing. If a book doesn’t have a good plot or action, there’s really only one more thing you can do to spice it up. Sure sex between Bella and Edward … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Sixteen

Posted on 12/24/2009 by vivisector

I think I’ve decoded Otis’s style. Whenever these chapters start with dialogue I know time has passed. Unless it’s someone else talking. Or maybe she doesn’t have a style and these are assembled in a haphazard fashion just as the … Continue reading →

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