Monthly Archives: December 2009

Eclipse Chapter Eighteen

Posted on 12/30/2009 by vivisector

Whew, I feel grounded again. The opening dialogue helps me out for this one. “That had to be the longest party in the history of the world,” I complained on the way home. No Bella, it only felt like that. … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Seventeen

Posted on 12/27/2009 by vivisector

Bella hears Edward’s soft voice from behind. Yes! Finally some boffing. If a book doesn’t have a good plot or action, there’s really only one more thing you can do to spice it up. Sure sex between Bella and Edward … Continue reading →

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Don’t Worry

Posted on 12/24/2009 by vivisector

So I leave one comment up to greet people but don’t be afraid to scroll down. The date these sticky posts show is not always indicative of the most recent. I leave it here because I don’t publish many uncategorized … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Sixteen

Posted on 12/24/2009 by vivisector

I think I’ve decoded Otis’s style. Whenever these chapters start with dialogue I know time has passed. Unless it’s someone else talking. Or maybe she doesn’t have a style and these are assembled in a haphazard fashion just as the … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Fifteen

Posted on 12/22/2009 by vivisector

Thanks for the positive comments folks. It’s good to see somebody is enjoying this besides myself. For more things that Otis has  borrowed elements from, besides the Southern Vampire Mysteries, see this link. I only remembered it because an ex … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Fourteen

Posted on 12/20/2009 by vivisector

Yet another chapter that starts off in mid conversation. I can’t help but feel that Otis is addressing me directly through Bella. “You can’t be serious,” I said Wednesday afternoon. “You’ve completely lost you mind!” Well I’m rereading Eclipse in … Continue reading →

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Posted on 12/20/2009 by vivisector

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Eclipse Chapter Thirteen

Posted on 12/18/2009 by vivisector

I don’t know what it is about the openings to these chapters. Every time I crack the book open and start one up I get a good line. “The same thing that happened to your hand.” Jasper answered in a … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Twelve

Posted on 12/16/2009 by vivisector

This chapter is called time. I think it’s supposed to be short for why waste your time reading this when there are unclean souls to cleanse from the earth with fire. Of course that was merely a suggestion by the … Continue reading →

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Eclipse Chapter Eleven

Posted on 12/13/2009 by vivisector

The openings to some of the chapters brings a thin ray of hope where it is not deserved. Take, for example, this gem of a beginning. “Are you gonna eat that hot dog?” That’s the kind of line that starts … Continue reading →

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